1 00:00:00,180 --> 00:00:00,620 Okay. 2 00:00:00,630 --> 00:00:05,310 Now let's go ahead and move forward with looking at some more body paragraphs. 3 00:00:05,580 --> 00:00:12,180 I'm going to start off by writing to body paragraphs so you can witness the sentence structure as it's 4 00:00:12,180 --> 00:00:12,900 happening. 5 00:00:13,260 --> 00:00:18,780 When you look at the paragraphs, you're going to first see a topic sentence that a detail that expanding 6 00:00:18,780 --> 00:00:21,200 it, detail expanding it. 7 00:00:21,210 --> 00:00:26,370 And there's no I'm not going to do a concluding sentence, although in some of the other examples, 8 00:00:26,370 --> 00:00:30,730 I'll point out to you where I did do a concluding sentence. 9 00:00:30,750 --> 00:00:33,390 So let's go ahead and get started. 10 00:00:33,660 --> 00:00:40,650 Now for this one, I'm going to go ahead and write both body paragraphs back to back. 11 00:00:40,890 --> 00:00:44,250 So I will be silent for a little while while I'm doing that. 12 00:00:44,340 --> 00:00:48,240 But you can go ahead and just watch the sentence structure. 13 00:00:48,240 --> 00:00:54,180 And I'm really hoping that you learn a couple of things that you can pick up and add into your own writing 14 00:00:54,180 --> 00:00:57,450 repertoire and impress the examiners. 15 00:01:05,500 --> 00:01:13,510 So I'm going to be I'm going to be writing the body paragraphs for the question, dealing with choosing 16 00:01:13,510 --> 00:01:14,770 one resource. 17 00:01:14,950 --> 00:01:22,090 And clearly from the outline you can see that I chose the trees as the resource that I'm going to argue 18 00:01:22,090 --> 00:01:22,750 for. 19 00:01:23,050 --> 00:01:29,290 And my argument is going to be based on the environmental benefit, the environmental benefits, and 20 00:01:29,290 --> 00:01:31,210 also the human benefits. 21 00:12:44,690 --> 00:12:45,100 Okay. 22 00:12:45,320 --> 00:12:46,310 And there we have it. 23 00:12:46,310 --> 00:12:54,320 We have a full, complete essay, a full, complete essay that's been written in terms of the body paragraphs, 24 00:12:54,440 --> 00:12:57,260 the introduction and a conclusion. 25 00:12:57,950 --> 00:13:03,560 So if you want to, you can take your time and read through it, you know, read through it and really 26 00:13:03,560 --> 00:13:07,850 take it in in terms of all of the different sentences that are structured. 27 00:13:07,850 --> 00:13:13,220 But we're following that exact same pattern of topic, sentence detail. 28 00:13:13,220 --> 00:13:18,290 Explain in detail detail number two and explain that detail. 29 00:13:18,410 --> 00:13:21,950 The same pattern over and over and over again. 30 00:13:26,000 --> 00:13:29,600 I'll let you take a look at this in the full screen mode. 31 00:13:31,730 --> 00:13:32,960 And there you have it. 32 00:13:39,470 --> 00:13:39,860 Okay. 33 00:13:39,860 --> 00:13:47,600 So now we have the body paragraphs for the question that was asking about reducing fossil fuel consumption. 34 00:13:47,960 --> 00:13:57,260 And again, what I'm doing here is I'm really pointing out to you and identifying every sentence that 35 00:13:57,260 --> 00:14:01,010 you need to write, every sentence that you need to write. 36 00:14:01,040 --> 00:14:03,650 So we start with a topic sentence. 37 00:14:05,780 --> 00:14:07,640 We start with the topic sentence. 38 00:14:08,060 --> 00:14:13,220 This first argument connects with cutting oil in light of the resulting pollution. 39 00:14:14,270 --> 00:14:20,420 Detail Number one a direct correlation exists between oil and global warming. 40 00:14:20,750 --> 00:14:22,430 Explain detail number one. 41 00:14:22,790 --> 00:14:28,820 Consider how automobiles run on this fossil fuel and the carbon release in the air warms the planet 42 00:14:28,820 --> 00:14:30,680 more than any other substance. 43 00:14:31,160 --> 00:14:32,390 Detail number two. 44 00:14:32,510 --> 00:14:40,670 In addition to the previous point, I'm connecting the ideas together the reduction of fossil fuel dependency 45 00:14:40,820 --> 00:14:43,070 as the elimination of water pollution. 46 00:14:43,310 --> 00:14:49,700 Now, I have to explain that this is because we have to transport this fossil derivative across the 47 00:14:49,700 --> 00:14:50,360 ocean. 48 00:14:50,390 --> 00:14:58,250 These ships accidentally commit oil spills that pollute our drinking water contamination through global 49 00:14:58,250 --> 00:15:04,010 warming and water pollution present only a few reasons to diminish oil usage. 50 00:15:04,040 --> 00:15:13,610 Now, this last sentence this last sentence is an example is an example of a concluding sentence. 51 00:15:14,360 --> 00:15:17,180 It's an example of a of a concluding sentence. 52 00:15:17,330 --> 00:15:23,090 I just wanted to give you a really good idea of what a concluding sentence reads like. 53 00:15:24,590 --> 00:15:26,660 Then we have the next body paragraph. 54 00:15:27,050 --> 00:15:27,590 Topic. 55 00:15:27,590 --> 00:15:28,370 Sentence. 56 00:15:28,610 --> 00:15:29,120 Yes. 57 00:15:29,120 --> 00:15:35,390 The points mentioned above offer strong arguments, but also consider alternative sources of power. 58 00:15:35,870 --> 00:15:42,980 Detail number one If administrations graciously decide to rely on more wind farms, less damage to the 59 00:15:42,980 --> 00:15:44,420 environment will result. 60 00:15:44,570 --> 00:15:45,800 Explain it. 61 00:15:46,460 --> 00:15:52,580 This is because a wind farm uses power from nature and therefore does not damage the earth. 62 00:15:52,610 --> 00:15:53,960 Then we move on to detail. 63 00:15:53,960 --> 00:15:56,960 Number two, connecting the ideas together. 64 00:15:56,960 --> 00:15:57,680 Everybody. 65 00:15:58,100 --> 00:16:05,660 While this point does resonate well, solar energy also provides a reason to cut back on oil. 66 00:16:05,690 --> 00:16:06,470 Explain detail. 67 00:16:06,470 --> 00:16:12,920 Number two The reasoning behind this position derives from how this power source contains no polluting 68 00:16:12,920 --> 00:16:13,610 ways. 69 00:16:13,730 --> 00:16:15,440 Concluding sentence. 70 00:16:15,470 --> 00:16:16,580 All in all. 71 00:16:16,670 --> 00:16:23,630 Wind farms and solar power provide ample power sources that support legislating less oil production. 72 00:16:24,530 --> 00:16:24,980 Right. 73 00:16:24,980 --> 00:16:26,270 So you can see that. 74 00:16:27,650 --> 00:16:32,000 You can see that right there with those two body paragraphs. 75 00:16:32,720 --> 00:16:35,660 You can see it right there with those two body paragraphs. 76 00:16:35,840 --> 00:16:45,410 How we go ahead and construct a proper body paragraph that the examiners are really going to fall in 77 00:16:45,410 --> 00:16:46,250 love with. 78 00:16:48,410 --> 00:16:48,800 All right. 79 00:16:48,800 --> 00:16:51,110 So we're going to take a short pulse. 80 00:16:51,680 --> 00:16:58,700 And then when we return, we will go ahead and look at just a few more paragraphs, just a few more 81 00:16:58,700 --> 00:17:07,790 paragraphs and a few more full essays before we wrap up our analysis of doing a high scoring standard 82 00:17:07,790 --> 00:17:09,050 academic essay.