1 00:00:00,610 --> 00:00:05,410 Now it's time for part number two of our outlining examples. 2 00:00:05,710 --> 00:00:09,400 Let's take a look at questions six through ten. 3 00:00:09,730 --> 00:00:10,390 This. 4 00:00:10,660 --> 00:00:13,360 These are the steps to precise writing. 5 00:00:13,780 --> 00:00:18,610 Outlining will give you the writing that examiners love to read. 6 00:00:18,610 --> 00:00:21,430 And they will always get you a really high score. 7 00:00:21,520 --> 00:00:25,390 Of course, you have to write with great grammar and vocabulary. 8 00:00:25,630 --> 00:00:26,770 You have to be coherent. 9 00:00:26,770 --> 00:00:28,510 All those other things matter. 10 00:00:28,900 --> 00:00:31,840 But doing great outlines leads to that. 11 00:00:32,590 --> 00:00:40,540 So keep in mind, if you want to practice along with me, you need to go ahead and make sure that you 12 00:00:40,540 --> 00:00:43,660 have paper and a timer right next to you. 13 00:00:43,690 --> 00:00:47,290 Set that timer on 3 minutes, 3 minutes for each outline. 14 00:00:47,320 --> 00:00:48,970 So let's go ahead and get started. 15 00:00:55,470 --> 00:00:55,680 All right. 16 00:00:55,710 --> 00:01:00,060 So question number six is an agree or disagree question. 17 00:01:00,060 --> 00:01:06,260 Scientific research should be the responsibility of governments rather than commercial organizations. 18 00:01:06,270 --> 00:01:07,860 Do you agree or disagree? 19 00:01:08,760 --> 00:01:09,150 Right. 20 00:01:09,150 --> 00:01:12,570 So always in this situation, you have to pick a side. 21 00:01:13,650 --> 00:01:16,080 This is not a to what extent question. 22 00:01:17,340 --> 00:01:20,130 This is a agree or disagree question. 23 00:01:20,130 --> 00:01:21,240 So you've got to pick a side. 24 00:01:21,240 --> 00:01:22,590 You can't be in the middle. 25 00:01:24,270 --> 00:01:28,560 So if I'm answering this question, I'm going to say that government should take the lead. 26 00:01:28,980 --> 00:01:31,130 That's the that's the choice I'm going to make. 27 00:01:31,150 --> 00:01:34,560 That's that's I'm going to agree. 28 00:01:35,510 --> 00:01:35,910 Right. 29 00:01:35,910 --> 00:01:39,990 And the first controlling idea is because governments lack bias. 30 00:01:41,250 --> 00:01:44,040 I know you might disagree with me, but hey, this is my essay. 31 00:01:44,490 --> 00:01:47,940 And then the first detail is no conflict of interest. 32 00:01:48,120 --> 00:01:52,170 And then B, private companies refuse to publish results. 33 00:01:53,160 --> 00:01:57,330 My second controlling idea is that the government owes the public duty. 34 00:01:58,110 --> 00:02:03,490 They will encourage the transferring of knowledge and there's no monetization. 35 00:02:03,510 --> 00:02:07,920 Private companies kill projects for that reason, no duty. 36 00:02:08,180 --> 00:02:12,600 Okay, so that's my outline of this question. 37 00:02:13,350 --> 00:02:19,800 I hope that you took the time to practice it for yourself so that you can work on your outlining along 38 00:02:19,800 --> 00:02:20,640 with me. 39 00:02:20,790 --> 00:02:27,180 I think it's great if you're practicing along with me because then you're able to check and possibly 40 00:02:27,180 --> 00:02:30,390 even confirm if you're doing something the right way. 41 00:02:33,980 --> 00:02:34,610 All right. 42 00:02:34,850 --> 00:02:37,100 Question or outline analysis. 43 00:02:37,100 --> 00:02:40,160 Number seven, another agree or disagree question. 44 00:02:40,160 --> 00:02:44,570 This is the one about face to face communication is better than other types of communication. 45 00:02:46,670 --> 00:02:51,350 And of course, stop and pause if you're going to try to do it yourself. 46 00:02:51,530 --> 00:02:53,450 I think that's a great practice. 47 00:02:53,480 --> 00:02:55,490 Here is my outline. 48 00:02:56,270 --> 00:03:00,980 I am going to completely agree that face to face is better. 49 00:03:02,420 --> 00:03:09,470 And actually what you'll see later on is with this particular question, I'm going to show you both 50 00:03:09,470 --> 00:03:11,240 ways of managing it. 51 00:03:11,510 --> 00:03:16,910 I'm going to answer the question in a way where I'm going to completely agree. 52 00:03:17,270 --> 00:03:22,060 And then also, I'm going to do it in the partially agreed style for a. 53 00:03:22,070 --> 00:03:23,510 To what extent question. 54 00:03:23,720 --> 00:03:26,780 But here you can see my first controlling idea. 55 00:03:26,780 --> 00:03:32,930 Why I completely agree is that it builds trust because you have nonverbal communication present and 56 00:03:32,930 --> 00:03:34,480 you can clarify meanings. 57 00:03:34,490 --> 00:03:42,950 And second, it builds relationships, it increases which increases camaraderie and has this leads to 58 00:03:42,950 --> 00:03:44,960 shared experiences and atmosphere. 59 00:03:45,200 --> 00:03:49,280 So that is my outline for this question. 60 00:03:51,470 --> 00:03:54,500 Now here you have the same question again. 61 00:03:55,010 --> 00:03:56,030 Except this. 62 00:03:56,450 --> 00:04:02,510 This time I'm going to go ahead and do it in a partially agreed format. 63 00:04:03,260 --> 00:04:06,530 So I still feel that face to face is stronger. 64 00:04:06,890 --> 00:04:10,510 And my my first my first body paragraph doesn't change. 65 00:04:10,520 --> 00:04:16,940 I'm still talking about building trust, but then my second body paragraph is wanting to talk about 66 00:04:16,940 --> 00:04:24,620 why I partially agree with the written text in terms of it avoiding mishaps, keeping a record and preventing 67 00:04:24,620 --> 00:04:25,100 mistakes. 68 00:04:25,100 --> 00:04:25,910 In fact. 69 00:04:26,150 --> 00:04:34,970 So this is where we're dealing with the partial agreement more fully agree with one side and partially 70 00:04:34,970 --> 00:04:36,770 somewhat agree on the other side. 71 00:04:37,130 --> 00:04:41,270 That's how you would structure it from an outlining standpoint. 72 00:04:43,960 --> 00:04:45,970 And then question number nine. 73 00:04:46,270 --> 00:04:52,540 Some people think that it is a very good idea to bring your family when traveling overseas for work 74 00:04:52,540 --> 00:04:53,980 or study reasons. 75 00:04:54,430 --> 00:04:57,190 Discuss the advantages and disadvantages. 76 00:04:57,220 --> 00:04:59,440 What is your opinion? 77 00:04:59,590 --> 00:05:05,710 So when you actually write this essay, you have to make sure that you include your opinion. 78 00:05:06,280 --> 00:05:13,690 That's very, very important in terms of outlining really, really straightforward the advantages. 79 00:05:13,690 --> 00:05:15,130 The disadvantages. 80 00:05:16,000 --> 00:05:16,750 Advantages. 81 00:05:16,750 --> 00:05:17,840 Don't get homesick. 82 00:05:17,860 --> 00:05:20,260 Provide better education opportunities. 83 00:05:20,770 --> 00:05:23,680 Disadvantage is expensive and distracting. 84 00:05:24,820 --> 00:05:28,360 So advantage, disadvantage, problem. 85 00:05:28,360 --> 00:05:31,090 Solution, call solution. 86 00:05:31,510 --> 00:05:35,740 You know, those are really, really straightforward in terms of outlining. 87 00:05:39,130 --> 00:05:42,400 And then question ten choice or preference. 88 00:05:42,550 --> 00:05:45,850 Many parts of the world are losing important natural resources. 89 00:05:45,880 --> 00:05:49,120 Choose one that you want to save. 90 00:05:49,390 --> 00:05:52,000 Choose one that you want to save. 91 00:05:54,090 --> 00:05:54,630 All right. 92 00:05:54,630 --> 00:05:57,450 And so my choice trees. 93 00:05:57,750 --> 00:06:04,680 And then my first controlling idea, the environmental benefits it cleans the air, prevents water run 94 00:06:04,680 --> 00:06:05,250 off. 95 00:06:05,250 --> 00:06:12,210 And then second are the human benefits saves energy and medicines are derived from trees. 96 00:06:12,540 --> 00:06:13,950 So that's my outline. 97 00:06:13,950 --> 00:06:20,130 This is going to enable me to write a very, very focused essay. 98 00:06:20,760 --> 00:06:23,340 And that's what examiners really, really love. 99 00:06:25,100 --> 00:06:25,580 All right. 100 00:06:25,580 --> 00:06:31,760 So coming up next, we're going to get into writing thesis statements, as you've heard me say, two 101 00:06:31,760 --> 00:06:33,140 or three times already. 102 00:06:33,170 --> 00:06:36,740 The most important sentence in the entire essay. 103 00:06:37,400 --> 00:06:41,630 And then after that, we're going to get into writing the full introduction. 104 00:06:41,870 --> 00:06:43,880 So thank you very much. 105 00:06:43,910 --> 00:06:45,290 It's been my pleasure. 106 00:06:45,320 --> 00:06:46,580 I'll talk to you soon.