1 00:00:00,120 --> 00:00:00,780 That's what I want. 2 00:00:01,860 --> 00:00:02,400 All right. 3 00:00:02,910 --> 00:00:04,530 That's the wrong transcript for that one. 4 00:00:05,070 --> 00:00:10,410 I wanted to point out to you and maybe I'll come back to it because I have two more practices to get 5 00:00:10,410 --> 00:00:11,160 through a practice for. 6 00:00:11,160 --> 00:00:16,500 And practice number five was before they got to the summary. 7 00:00:16,770 --> 00:00:23,640 They had a lot of filler language, so they had a lot of language that they said that was really irrelevant. 8 00:00:24,090 --> 00:00:28,050 And many times when they have a lot of this excess language. 9 00:00:28,910 --> 00:00:36,170 They have that excess language because they're trying to they're trying to they're trying to throw you 10 00:00:36,170 --> 00:00:37,460 off sometimes. 11 00:00:39,440 --> 00:00:39,600 Right. 12 00:00:39,680 --> 00:00:41,630 They're trying to throw you off sometimes. 13 00:00:42,590 --> 00:00:45,230 And so for practice number four. 14 00:00:45,770 --> 00:00:48,320 For practice number four, we're now going to do practice number four. 15 00:00:48,320 --> 00:00:50,570 And I'm going to try to get to practice number five. 16 00:00:51,330 --> 00:00:53,070 For practice number four. 17 00:00:54,190 --> 00:01:04,540 We're answering two parts, actually, your answering the diagram or really the diagram filling in the 18 00:01:04,540 --> 00:01:05,690 blanks of the diagram. 19 00:01:05,710 --> 00:01:06,490 21. 20 00:01:06,490 --> 00:01:07,990 22, 23. 21 00:01:07,990 --> 00:01:09,550 24, 25. 22 00:01:10,460 --> 00:01:11,960 And then also. 23 00:01:12,770 --> 00:01:21,200 Also you are answering also your answering the short answer questions. 24 00:01:21,820 --> 00:01:22,120 Right. 25 00:01:22,130 --> 00:01:26,090 So we're going from 21 all the way to 30. 26 00:01:27,010 --> 00:01:27,540 Right now. 27 00:01:27,540 --> 00:01:29,870 Of course, with this one, they break it into parts. 28 00:01:29,880 --> 00:01:37,470 First you'll do 21 to 25, then they'll stop the audio and give you time to look at 26 to 30 and then 29 00:01:37,470 --> 00:01:40,890 start the audio and you answer 26 to 30. 30 00:01:41,340 --> 00:01:43,050 OC Let's go ahead. 31 00:01:43,050 --> 00:01:47,520 I'm going to start the audio again from this point forward until the end. 32 00:01:47,520 --> 00:01:49,890 Please don't ask a question in the chat box. 33 00:01:49,890 --> 00:01:50,490 Thank you. 34 00:01:55,440 --> 00:01:56,940 Recording 49. 35 00:01:57,690 --> 00:02:01,410 You will hear two students discussing an assignment. 36 00:02:02,400 --> 00:02:07,140 First you have some time to look at questions 21 to 25. 37 00:02:36,980 --> 00:02:38,180 Hi, Melanie. 38 00:02:38,210 --> 00:02:42,020 What did you think of the assignment that we got today? 39 00:02:42,050 --> 00:02:43,910 It looks interesting, doesn't it? 40 00:02:43,940 --> 00:02:45,080 Yes, Alan. 41 00:02:45,290 --> 00:02:50,690 I've always been interested in recycling, but there's a lot of research to do. 42 00:02:50,720 --> 00:02:54,850 Yes, there are a lot of things I'm unsure of. 43 00:02:54,860 --> 00:02:57,860 So it's going to be good working with you. 44 00:02:57,890 --> 00:03:04,700 Okay, well, why don't we start by making a flowchart from the notes that you to give us? 45 00:03:04,730 --> 00:03:05,480 Yes. 46 00:03:06,350 --> 00:03:16,190 So on one side, we could have the paper production cycle here on the left and on the other side, the 47 00:03:16,190 --> 00:03:17,210 recycling. 48 00:03:17,240 --> 00:03:18,350 Good idea. 49 00:03:18,890 --> 00:03:22,040 Let's start at the top with the production. 50 00:03:22,550 --> 00:03:26,690 The first step in the process is to get the raw materials. 51 00:03:26,690 --> 00:03:27,500 Yes. 52 00:03:27,500 --> 00:03:32,480 And they tend to come from pine forests, oak. 53 00:03:33,140 --> 00:03:37,520 And then the bark is removed from the outside of the tree. 54 00:03:37,520 --> 00:03:41,120 And after that, the wood is chopped up. 55 00:03:41,210 --> 00:03:43,640 That's the first three stages. 56 00:03:43,910 --> 00:03:47,210 It sounds a bit complicated after that. 57 00:03:48,290 --> 00:03:55,760 It says water is added and then the mixture is heated and made into pulp. 58 00:03:56,510 --> 00:04:00,650 This will be the thick paste that is used to make paper. 59 00:04:00,680 --> 00:04:08,270 Yes, you're right, because after that they use a machine to make the paper and we can put that right 60 00:04:08,270 --> 00:04:14,820 in the centre of the flowchart, because it's also where the recycled paper joins the process. 61 00:04:14,840 --> 00:04:15,700 Yes. 62 00:04:15,710 --> 00:04:22,430 So once the paper has been produced in the machine, what happens then? 63 00:04:22,550 --> 00:04:31,220 Well, I think we should write print as the next step, because this is when newspapers, magazines, 64 00:04:31,220 --> 00:04:33,200 etc. are produced. 65 00:04:33,620 --> 00:04:40,220 And we could also add that they have to be distributed to stores and people's homes. 66 00:04:40,250 --> 00:04:41,330 Right. 67 00:04:41,360 --> 00:04:50,630 Then the recycling bit starts, the old papers collected, and then it says it's taken somewhere so 68 00:04:50,630 --> 00:04:54,440 that someone or something can sort it. 69 00:04:54,950 --> 00:05:02,700 I imagine there are different kinds of paper or things like paper clips that need to be removed. 70 00:05:02,720 --> 00:05:03,740 Yes. 71 00:05:04,010 --> 00:05:06,620 Let's have a step after that. 72 00:05:07,280 --> 00:05:11,150 Now, how did I get you to say they do this? 73 00:05:11,810 --> 00:05:12,650 Oh, yes. 74 00:05:12,650 --> 00:05:14,870 It involves chemicals. 75 00:05:15,080 --> 00:05:17,720 So how is your chemistry? 76 00:05:17,870 --> 00:05:20,450 Well, not very good, I'm afraid. 77 00:05:20,840 --> 00:05:28,820 But this is how they remove ink, so this is definitely going to need a bit of research. 78 00:05:28,850 --> 00:05:29,840 Right. 79 00:05:31,220 --> 00:05:39,680 The last step in the recycling section is similar to the last step in the production process with heating 80 00:05:39,680 --> 00:05:43,580 and pulping before the cycle begins again. 81 00:06:13,520 --> 00:06:15,560 Now listen and answer questions. 82 00:06:15,560 --> 00:06:17,330 26 to 30. 83 00:06:18,530 --> 00:06:22,430 So I think going through the process is helped. 84 00:06:22,640 --> 00:06:27,030 Now we need to decide how we're going to do this assignment. 85 00:06:27,050 --> 00:06:34,580 Yes, I guess what we need to do is take the processes and divide them up between us. 86 00:06:34,940 --> 00:06:38,330 But we could start thinking about an introduction. 87 00:06:38,330 --> 00:06:38,800 Yes. 88 00:06:38,810 --> 00:06:39,360 Okay. 89 00:06:39,380 --> 00:06:42,100 Well, I can start doing that. 90 00:06:42,110 --> 00:06:44,720 I think I have enough to go on already. 91 00:06:44,750 --> 00:06:45,530 Good. 92 00:06:45,980 --> 00:06:50,480 And there are a few areas where we need a lot more information. 93 00:06:50,990 --> 00:06:54,350 I think I'll start with something easy. 94 00:06:54,650 --> 00:06:57,230 Let's say the paper collection. 95 00:06:57,440 --> 00:07:01,310 I could go to the resource center to do some research. 96 00:07:01,340 --> 00:07:08,090 Well, I think a better idea would be to approach someone who's involved in the process. 97 00:07:08,300 --> 00:07:10,820 What about contacting the council? 98 00:07:10,850 --> 00:07:12,890 Oh, good idea. 99 00:07:12,920 --> 00:07:15,620 Yes, I'll do that instead. 100 00:07:15,650 --> 00:07:18,050 They're bound to have some information. 101 00:07:18,620 --> 00:07:24,180 And I know just the thing to add to our work to make it even more interesting. 102 00:07:24,200 --> 00:07:25,370 And what's that? 103 00:07:25,400 --> 00:07:33,890 Well, in my last assignment, I added a few pictures, and the feedback I got was that this wasn't 104 00:07:33,890 --> 00:07:35,330 academic enough. 105 00:07:35,750 --> 00:07:42,760 So what might really bring it to life would be to include some data provided we can find some. 106 00:07:42,770 --> 00:07:45,110 Yes, that sounds excellent. 107 00:07:45,770 --> 00:07:50,750 Well, we certainly have a lot to do and not much time to do it in. 108 00:07:50,990 --> 00:07:52,130 You're right. 109 00:07:52,490 --> 00:08:01,160 I think we have about five weeks, so I suggest we create a plan of work today by the end of the month 110 00:08:01,160 --> 00:08:05,620 is nearly three weeks away and then we have a few days holiday. 111 00:08:05,630 --> 00:08:06,440 Yes. 112 00:08:06,530 --> 00:08:13,490 So let's see if we can get the first draft done by then so we can take a short break. 113 00:08:13,520 --> 00:08:14,270 Okay. 114 00:08:14,570 --> 00:08:19,250 Then after the break, we'll have just over a week to complete it. 115 00:08:19,700 --> 00:08:26,450 I wonder if we could get someone to review our work for us a few days before the deadline so we can 116 00:08:26,450 --> 00:08:28,400 make some final changes. 117 00:08:28,940 --> 00:08:31,310 What about your friend, Henry? 118 00:08:31,340 --> 00:08:34,790 Well, the best person would be our tutor. 119 00:08:35,030 --> 00:08:41,720 Henry's very good, but he's taking a whole week's holiday, and there won't be enough time when he 120 00:08:41,720 --> 00:08:42,770 returns. 121 00:08:42,800 --> 00:08:45,050 Okay, then that's fine. 122 00:08:47,950 --> 00:08:50,320 That is the end of Section three. 123 00:08:51,100 --> 00:08:51,750 You now. 124 00:08:52,760 --> 00:08:53,180 Okay. 125 00:08:53,180 --> 00:08:55,310 Let's go ahead and go over the answer choices. 126 00:09:00,110 --> 00:09:03,320 Number 21 is Pine Forest. 127 00:09:04,210 --> 00:09:09,760 They mentioned raw materials, and then they gave you some filler language. 128 00:09:10,730 --> 00:09:12,020 And then they see it. 129 00:09:12,020 --> 00:09:14,510 It comes from the pine forest. 130 00:09:15,310 --> 00:09:16,900 Number 22 is water. 131 00:09:17,410 --> 00:09:19,330 Number 22 was really straightforward. 132 00:09:19,480 --> 00:09:23,140 Water is added for number 22. 133 00:09:23,470 --> 00:09:25,510 And then we're moving up. 134 00:09:25,990 --> 00:09:31,360 And they told you we're going to put paper produce in the center of this of the of the chart. 135 00:09:32,200 --> 00:09:33,290 And then next. 136 00:09:33,300 --> 00:09:37,030 Next, naturally it goes here and they say it right. 137 00:09:37,030 --> 00:09:39,100 Print as the next step. 138 00:09:40,430 --> 00:09:42,560 Right print as the next step. 139 00:09:43,300 --> 00:09:47,620 And then they then then they said and add distribution. 140 00:09:48,170 --> 00:09:52,000 Something about distributing distributing the materials to the stores. 141 00:09:53,620 --> 00:09:54,550 Number 24. 142 00:09:54,580 --> 00:09:56,230 They said collect use paper. 143 00:09:56,770 --> 00:10:01,960 And then for number 24, they say it's sort old papers collected. 144 00:10:01,960 --> 00:10:04,090 So old papers use paper. 145 00:10:04,120 --> 00:10:10,870 All papers are collected so something or someone can sort them. 146 00:10:12,040 --> 00:10:12,610 All right. 147 00:10:12,850 --> 00:10:15,700 Number 25 is remove ink. 148 00:10:16,240 --> 00:10:20,350 They said the step after that, right after the sorting. 149 00:10:21,240 --> 00:10:22,590 The step after that. 150 00:10:22,590 --> 00:10:25,020 And then they talked about chemicals and chemistry. 151 00:10:25,260 --> 00:10:28,470 So they played around with the word form of chemicals and chemistry. 152 00:10:28,980 --> 00:10:35,250 Then they had some filler and they said this, this, or they said this or these. 153 00:10:35,250 --> 00:10:41,340 But they're using a pronoun here this meaning the chemistry is how they remove ink. 154 00:10:42,090 --> 00:10:42,410 Right. 155 00:10:42,600 --> 00:10:43,650 Removing ink. 156 00:10:44,160 --> 00:10:47,640 And the answer is use chemicals to remove ink. 157 00:10:48,590 --> 00:10:48,790 Right. 158 00:10:48,870 --> 00:10:51,180 So that's how we do the flowchart. 159 00:10:52,420 --> 00:10:55,710 I have a couple of questions before I go to the next thing. 160 00:11:03,540 --> 00:11:05,060 Can you please know? 161 00:11:05,100 --> 00:11:07,500 Can you please confirm 21? 162 00:11:08,610 --> 00:11:11,790 It looks like everyone heard Pine Forest. 163 00:11:12,790 --> 00:11:13,330 Here. 164 00:11:19,660 --> 00:11:20,230 Okay. 165 00:11:20,830 --> 00:11:21,490 Give me one moment. 166 00:11:21,490 --> 00:11:23,170 I'll see if I typed it wrong here. 167 00:11:23,170 --> 00:11:25,270 I'll check if I typed it wrong, I will check. 168 00:11:25,300 --> 00:11:26,560 Give me one moment, please. 169 00:11:28,360 --> 00:11:29,890 I'm going to. 170 00:11:29,920 --> 00:11:31,180 I'll check it right. 171 00:11:31,180 --> 00:11:31,780 Right now. 172 00:11:31,780 --> 00:11:33,460 So give me one moment, please. 173 00:11:48,830 --> 00:11:49,400 All right, everybody. 174 00:11:49,400 --> 00:11:52,810 So thank you for bringing that up. 175 00:11:52,820 --> 00:11:56,210 I did make a typing mistake and it is forests with the nests. 176 00:11:56,970 --> 00:11:57,110 Right. 177 00:11:57,290 --> 00:11:58,940 It is for us within s. 178 00:12:01,960 --> 00:12:02,590 No, no, no. 179 00:12:02,590 --> 00:12:03,040 I just. 180 00:12:03,040 --> 00:12:04,150 I just confirmed it. 181 00:12:04,150 --> 00:12:05,830 It is for us within six. 182 00:12:08,490 --> 00:12:16,320 When I was typing, I was manually typing in these answer choices and I forgot to put the yes. 183 00:12:16,320 --> 00:12:19,680 So yes, it is from pine forests. 184 00:12:20,440 --> 00:12:24,130 Because if you just look at it grammatically, everybody. 185 00:12:24,870 --> 00:12:30,090 If you look at it grammatically for the answer to be Pine Force, they would have to have the article 186 00:12:30,120 --> 00:12:31,350 a after from. 187 00:12:32,520 --> 00:12:39,000 It would have to say get raw materials from a pine forest, but there is no article A there. 188 00:12:39,330 --> 00:12:43,350 And so this has to be plural pine forest, right? 189 00:12:43,470 --> 00:12:48,120 So so we can just look at it just grammatically and see that I made a typing mistake. 190 00:12:49,570 --> 00:12:50,110 All right. 191 00:12:55,400 --> 00:13:02,530 On the next one we can see the answer choices or the introduction. 192 00:13:03,050 --> 00:13:04,250 The Council. 193 00:13:04,970 --> 00:13:09,440 Some data first draft and Tudor. 194 00:13:11,140 --> 00:13:11,640 Right. 195 00:13:11,650 --> 00:13:13,780 So start thinking about. 196 00:13:14,380 --> 00:13:15,820 Start working on. 197 00:13:16,600 --> 00:13:23,470 Number 27 is interesting because for number 27, let me explain to you what happened on number 27. 198 00:13:24,370 --> 00:13:25,600 For number 27. 199 00:13:25,600 --> 00:13:27,880 They said we need to get more information. 200 00:13:28,820 --> 00:13:34,040 And then Melanie made a suggestion, and then the man dismissed her. 201 00:13:35,190 --> 00:13:36,450 He was kind of sexist. 202 00:13:36,450 --> 00:13:43,200 I don't know any any of the any of the women in my class here may have experienced this before, where 203 00:13:43,200 --> 00:13:49,770 some guy you're working with dismisses your suggestion, but he dismissed her suggestion. 204 00:13:50,310 --> 00:13:56,010 And then he made a suggestion and said, we should approach someone involved in the process. 205 00:13:57,780 --> 00:14:00,870 You know, the council, they're bound to have new information. 206 00:14:00,870 --> 00:14:02,640 And then she confirmed it. 207 00:14:03,150 --> 00:14:04,500 So she said something. 208 00:14:04,500 --> 00:14:07,470 He said, no, no, no, no, no, we're not doing that. 209 00:14:07,830 --> 00:14:11,910 We should you should approach the council because they're going to have good information. 210 00:14:11,910 --> 00:14:13,230 And then she confirmed it. 211 00:14:14,010 --> 00:14:17,820 And then the same thing happened in number 30. 212 00:14:19,320 --> 00:14:21,450 They talked about who they should ask for review. 213 00:14:21,690 --> 00:14:26,250 And then she made a suggestion and then he dismissed her again. 214 00:14:27,000 --> 00:14:28,740 He dismissed her again. 215 00:14:29,310 --> 00:14:30,450 And then. 216 00:14:30,990 --> 00:14:31,890 And then she. 217 00:14:32,190 --> 00:14:34,320 She said we should see a tutor. 218 00:14:34,710 --> 00:14:39,060 And then she just said, Well, och, yeah, well, that's fine. 219 00:14:39,570 --> 00:14:45,360 But you have to recognise that that happens sometimes. 220 00:14:45,960 --> 00:14:52,890 At times somebody can confirm that they're giving that they're giving the right answer and that at other 221 00:14:52,890 --> 00:14:59,880 times you have, you know, sexist guys like Alan who thinks he knows more than Melanie. 222 00:15:00,090 --> 00:15:03,060 And everything that Melanie says, he dismisses it. 223 00:15:03,450 --> 00:15:08,460 But Melanie is nice enough to go ahead and say, okay, we'll do that. 224 00:15:10,140 --> 00:15:10,440 All right. 225 00:15:10,440 --> 00:15:11,760 But those are the answer choices. 226 00:15:11,760 --> 00:15:13,170 Introduction, counsel. 227 00:15:13,410 --> 00:15:16,920 Those words that are in those words that are in parentheses. 228 00:15:17,830 --> 00:15:18,400 Those words. 229 00:15:18,400 --> 00:15:22,690 Yeah, he's he's mansplaining to her those words that are in parentheses. 230 00:15:23,620 --> 00:15:25,720 Allen is doing a lot of mansplaining. 231 00:15:26,140 --> 00:15:29,670 The words in parentheses are not necessary right there. 232 00:15:29,770 --> 00:15:31,240 They're not necessary. 233 00:15:34,710 --> 00:15:41,040 Because on number 28 is they said the key word here is interesting, make it more interesting. 234 00:15:41,250 --> 00:15:43,920 And then you had to hear the synonym language. 235 00:15:43,920 --> 00:15:45,150 Bring it to life. 236 00:15:45,240 --> 00:15:46,140 What did they bring? 237 00:15:46,230 --> 00:15:46,470 What? 238 00:15:46,470 --> 00:15:47,720 What are you bringing to life? 239 00:15:47,730 --> 00:15:49,710 You're bringing some data to life. 240 00:15:50,690 --> 00:15:56,060 So the word data is directly connected to the paraphrasing of interesting. 241 00:15:56,270 --> 00:15:58,070 That's why the answer is data. 242 00:16:02,610 --> 00:16:04,440 All right, we have some time. 243 00:16:04,440 --> 00:16:07,170 So I'm going to do I'm going I'm going to do this last one very quickly. 244 00:16:07,170 --> 00:16:11,370 And then I got I have to go to my next class.