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‫So we're going to take a look at a model, right, of a bar graph, a very common question type within

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‫Eilts writing task one.

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‫So are we going through a full life answer of a bar graph?

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‫So let's begin let's take a look at our question.

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‫The bar charts show the types of holiday accommodation chosen in four British countries during 2010

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‫summarized the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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‫OK, so back to our topic sentence in the question, the bar charts.

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‫So I'm assuming there'll be a few of them types of holiday accommodation, I guess, hotels, caravans,

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‫hostels, bed and breakfasts.

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‫I think of any more right now in four British countries.

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‫Well, being from Britain, I know that that will most likely be England, Scotland, Northern Ireland

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‫and Wales during one year.

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‫OK, one thing I want to remind people of the topic sentence.

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‫Our first sentence in the question is important.

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‫Our second sentence, which is always the same, is also important just to understand, select and report

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‫main features.

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‫We need to do that to achieve our task achievement band descriptor, make comparisons.

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‫So there are really two important things.

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‫Report main features, make comparisons where relevant when it makes sense to do so.

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‫OK, let's take a look at these bar graphs, then these bar charts.

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‫So there we have it looks pretty straightforward to begin with the title Holiday Accommodation chosen

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‫by the British in 2010.

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‫We have England on the left, followed by Scotland, Wales, then Northern Ireland on the x axis of

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‫our bar chart.

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‫On the Y axis.

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‫We have percentages up from up from zero all the way to 60 percent.

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‫Take a look at the key, please.

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‫We have four types of accommodation.

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‫Let's see what I got right self-catering, which means probably a cottage or a house that you rent and

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‫you cook your own food.

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‫Self catered.

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‫We have a caravan, a very British type of holiday accommodation.

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‫Then we have camping.

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‫I think I said that.

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‫And we also have hotels, of course, very popular indeed.

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‫So just taking a look at this and getting a bit of an understanding first thing that springs to mind

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‫possibly useful for the overview once we get to our plan, hotels super popular pretty much in all countries.

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‫That could be a great piece of information for my overview.

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‫Okay.

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‫Before we write our plan, I want to show you some important language to review and remind yourself

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‫of.

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‫So here's some vocabulary for graphs and charts.

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‫So that could be bar charts, line graphs, pie charts, whichever it is, and of course, taken from

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‫one of the courses, My Alf's courses.

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‫And it's just some interesting language and interesting visualization to remind yourself of the verb

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‫plus adverb structure.

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‫So on the left we have going down sankt plunge, decreased, dropped, fell, declined.

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‫All these verbs for going down, the trend going down, then we have no change plateaued or stabilised.

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‫And of course we have the trend of increasing, rocketed, surged, increased, grew, rose and climbed.

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‫Of course we're all in the past tense here and we can plus this with the adverbs in the blue box on

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‫the right.

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‫And we go from a really quick, a huge change rapidly all the way down to just a small change, slowly.

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‫So really important that we have a good understanding of all this vocabulary.

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‫And it's super useful when we're writing to it might be wise if you haven't done this in ls writing

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‫seven plus to bookmark this now and have a go using it in your writing too.

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‫OK, so back to the question and the plan.

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‫So here is my plan and I think it's time that I start grouping and thinking of my overview now.

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‫OK, so let's begin with group one, of course.

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‫So how would I go about or grouping these countries?

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‫Remember when we grew up?

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‫We want to keep it super simple, as simple as possible, really.

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‫So how can I group the data in front of me where my first instinct is to have England versus Scotland

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‫has group one and group two could be comparing Wales and Northern Ireland.

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‫Or I could also do a remembering I can't group by time.

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‫We only have one year.

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‫I could also group by type of accommodation, self-catering and caravan in group one and camping and

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‫hotel in group two.

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‫They both could work.

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‫But ask yourself when you group what is the most simple method of grouping?

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‫What would be the easiest for the examiner to understand?

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‫Key point.

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‫And I think England and Scotland for Group one.

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‫Purely because they're next to each other on the graph, no other reason, it's just makes sense for

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‫me and Wales and Northern Ireland.

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‫Now, it would also be true that the examiner will be able to see this.

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‫So if you're grouping these two together in your answer kind of makes sense for the examiner.

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‫It's not grouping England and Northern Ireland.

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‫And he may be or she may be sort of thinking why of a group like that.

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‫It makes sense to a group like this in our detailed paragraphs.

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‫OK, so there we go.

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‫So I've got my grouping superimportant and my overview.

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‫Now, let's just consider a couple of ideas here.

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‫So I'm going to obviously, before I said the first thing I noticed without reporting too many specific

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‫figures is to say that hotels are the most important ostry, the most popular type of accommodation

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‫in all countries.

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‫I'm not giving any figures which I try not to do in my overview.

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‫I just give the overall picture.

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‫Is there anything else that we could say?

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‫Nothing really comes to mind.

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‫We can use one or two sentences for the overview.

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‫Generally, one is OK as well.

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‫There's nothing here that strikes me other than self-catering is quite popular in these three, but

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‫not Northern Ireland possibly could mention this.

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‫Is there anything that's not popular really?

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‫I could say camping is generally considered not so popular, but not so much because caravans here.

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‫So I just think basically to say that hotels are the most import, most popular hotels most popular.

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‫Now, remember, this is obviously a slow example of writing our plan.

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‫And you'll notice as I'm writing and obviously talking to you about this up this report, I'm analyzing

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‫the data straight away.

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‫I am understanding some of the information I can see.

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‫And this is why a pun is super important, because it automatically makes us understand the visual information.

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‫So this is really all I want to say.

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‫I just want to say this.

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‫Hotels are the most popular and there's nothing else that really strikes me here.

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‫I can't see that one country likes going on holidays more, for example.

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‫I think that would be it.

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‫Okay, so my plan is complete and it's time for us to begin our writing.

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‫And here we are, so as you can see, I've also added this information here, our key vocabulary for

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‫bar charts and graphs of all sorts, just as a reminder for myself as I write, of course, the more

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‫I use this, the more it becomes natural.

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‫OK, so let's begin with our writing.

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‫Of course, the first thing I need to do is to paraphrase my introduction.

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‫So just take that topic sentence from the question and rewrite.

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‫OK, the bar charts, so let's begin the bar charts, the given bar charts I always use given just to

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‫mix up the supplied bar charts, I could put bar graphs to just make it a little bit different.

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‫But really, a bar chart is a bar chart.

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‫That's fine.

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‫The supplied bar charts show.

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‫Let's use illustrate display.

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‫I always use illustrate.

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‫Let's try and be different today.

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‫Display the types.

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‫What else can we say.

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‫Four times the modes.

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‫Possibly the modes.

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‫The types.

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‫The modes I'm going to use of holiday accommodation, accommodation enjoyed I will say enjoyed.

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‫It doesn't have to be that.

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‫That means that they change their sorry, a comma accommodation.

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‫Enjoyed are still spelled that wrong.

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‫How did I spy that wrong?

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‫Oh, enjoyed Chozen purchased, used maybe will be better enjoyed.

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‫Could also work used in four British countries.

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‫In the four countries.

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‫Of the U.K. during the year 2010 pretty much says exactly the same, it does say exactly the same as

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‫this, but with slightly different language.

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‫Let's read this back.

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‫The supply bar charts display the modes of holiday accommodation used in the four countries on the United

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‫Kingdom of the UK.

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‫Good job.

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‫I'm editing of the UK during the year 2010.

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‫Perfect.

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‫And now onto my overview.

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‫Now, one thing I refuse to do is to change my overview opener overall, comma.

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‫I really do like using this.

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‫Overall, we can see that pretty much always can start my overview with this.

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‫Overall, we can see that hotels were the most frequented, which means attended, which means that

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‫I have visited the most frequented holiday stay in all countries.

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‫Now, here, stay.

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‫I'm really trying not to use accommodation too much.

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‫I feel like I might repeat myself here.

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‫So I'm going to start trying to think of different ways to say this.

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‫Let's read this back.

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‫Overall, we can see that hotels were the most frequented holiday stay in all countries.

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‫Perfectly fine gives the big picture.

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‫Doesn't give any figures, though.

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‫No numbers or percentages given.

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‫Just gives the overall big message of the data.

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‫OK, so let's begin with group one.

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‫And you remember that Group one is England and Scotland.

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‫How can I explain this information so that it makes sense so that it's in order and I don't miss too

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‫much.

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‫I could go from blue to green to orange to red, blue to green, to orange to red in order to compare.

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‫That just makes sense.

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‫And maybe I could start with the highest and work my way down, but I'm probably just going to go from

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‫hotels and describe the rest.

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‫So let's say in England.

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‫In England.

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‫Over, we could say around, so we can't see the exact figure, but it looks about halfway between 50

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‫and 60, around 55 percent of holiday makers.

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‫Chose hotels.

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‫In comparison.

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‫In comparison to around 50 to about 52 percent in Scotland.

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‫Again, I'm repeating myself from the overview, the highest proportion in both countries.

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‫And then I'm going to probably go on to Blue, which looks to be the second most popular choice in both,

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‫the second most popular accommodation, stay lodging could work, the second most popular lodging.

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‫Lodging was self catering.

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‫In both countries at 30 percent in Scotland.

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‫And just slightly less.

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‫Slightly less at twenty seven percent in England.

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‫OK, so now we can see that we have significantly lower or we could say are looking at our vocabulary

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‫here, we could say these figures sank significantly for both caravans and camping.

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‫So just trying to use up these are really better for trend.

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‫So trends are better on time, but we can still use them for this kind of bar chart in a single time

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‫period.

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‫So we could say these figures, let's say, plunged.

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‫Plunged and then we probably don't want to say moderately, we're not going to say speed because speed

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‫is over time, we need an adverb of a mount so moderately would be significantly, I think would make

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‫sense significantly for both caravan and camping holidays in both countries.

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‫Now I'm going to show you something that is wrong, sound strange?

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‫It is, in a way.

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‫But I just want to make this important point and I often see in people's writings.

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‫So I'm just going to write something.

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‫Now, I want you to think, what is wrong with this?

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‫Let's just read back what I have so far.

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‫The figures plunged significantly for both caravan and camping holidays, plural, of course, in both

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‫countries.

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‫OK, so what am I doing wrong here?

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‫Most probably due to weather and let's say outdoor and weather and cold and coldness, not great English,

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‫but it proves a point.

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‫OK, so the figures plunged significantly for both caravan and camping holidays in both countries,

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‫most probably due to weather and coldness.

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‫OK, so what is wrong with this sentence here?

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‫So I do see this happening at times.

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‫And I just want to go back to the question here, summarize the information.

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‫So report the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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‫At no point does it ask you to guess reasons for the date.

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‫You can see all you need to do is to report the date.

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‫So there's no need for me to give a reason on why I think the data has happened.

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‫I don't know.

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‫I'm just guessing said do not include anything like that.

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‫The figures plunged significantly for both caravan and camping holidays in both countries.

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‫I want to quickly give the percentages.

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‫I don't want to then go into another long sentence, as I think I'm probably getting from just looking

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‫at this so far and probably get into about the right size for my paragraphs here, especially my detailed

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‫paragraphs.

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‫So I'm just going to say the figures plunged significantly for both caravan and camping holidays in

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‫both countries.

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‫At between less find the lowest.

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‫It looks to be around 16 percent, between 16 percent.

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‫This is in this sort of caravan and camping here.

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‫And then also, quite interestingly, which looks to be easy for me, is this camping and caravan here

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‫is at around 12 percent.

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‫Oh, and here I made a mistake at six percent for these here to 12 percent between six and 12 percent

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‫for each team.

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‫Now, I'm not going into too much detail here.

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‫I'm not saying exactly which which of these holiday types and in which country is at which figure.

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‫I'm just giving a bit of a general statement.

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‫The figures plunged significantly for both caravan and camping holidays in both countries, between

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‫six and 12 percent for each in any country in both countries.

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‫I could add that, but I'm just going to leave that as I've already said it.

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‫It gives a good enough idea of caravan and camping holidays and reporting the main features, of course.

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‫Okay, so that's England and Scotland.

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‫Don't let's have a quick read.

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‫Back in England, around 55 percent of holidaymakers chose hotels in comparison to about 52 percent

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‫in Scotland.

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‫Hyphen.

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‫Love that punctuation again, the highest proportion in both countries.

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‫The second most popular lodging was self-catering in both countries at 30 percent in Scotland and just

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‫slightly less at 20 percent in England.

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‫The figures plunged significantly for both caravan and camping holidays in both countries at between

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‫six and 12 percent for each.

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‫OK, so group one is done.

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‫Nice detail here.

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‫So I'm probably going to begin in a similar way and describe this in a similar way.

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‫In a similar way, let's say hotel hotels were the most popular in Wales, and I'm not going to write,

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‫I'm going to have a brief use an abbreviation here for Northern Ireland and type and I because it's

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‫a bit of a long word or double word, Wales.

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‫And I meant, let's say 40 at around 48 percent.

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‫And that's Wales, 48 percent, 49 percent.

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‫That's OK.

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‫And let's say 45 percent, respectively.

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‫Always good to use at least once in our writing in a similar way.

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‫Hotels were the most popular in Wales, in Northern Ireland at around 48 percent and forty five percent

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‫respectively, in a similar way.

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‫A great way to make comparisons between groups or sets of data.

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‫OK, so up next, I can say that maybe I can talk about we can say in Wales, the second most popular

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‫with self-catering, although this was one of the least popular modes in Northern Ireland.

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‫Let's write this in in Wales, the second most popular accommodation have a use that in the previous

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‫sentence I haven't.

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‫The second most popular accommodation was self-catering where as I keep misspelling here, accommodation

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‫was self-catering.

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‫Where as.

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‫The where as the second most favored choice I'm using paraphrasing here, I don't want to say second

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‫most popular again, the second most favoured choice in Northern Ireland was a caravan caravan trips.

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‫So I'm not giving I haven't given the percentage here I could do.

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‫In Wales, the second most popular accommodation was self-catering.

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‫You know what I will with Bracket and I'm going to say here, 28 percent.

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‫I quite like using brackets in my writing, it definitely adds a little bit of flair, a little bit

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‫of extra sort of showing off your skills, so do try and use them a little bit.

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‫Of course, do not overuse it.

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‫Let's go back in way.

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‫The second most popular accommodation was self-catering 28 percent, whereas the most second, whereas

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‫the second most favoured choice in Northern Ireland was caravan trips.

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‫And I'll use brackets again, 30, it looks to be 31 percent.

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‫OK, so I'm definitely coming up to about that 150 mark just by looking at it, so you know what I'll

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‫do?

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‫I'm going to speed this up a little bit and just sort of probably in a similar way, just say that both

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‫we can say in Wales and Northern Ireland, caravan and camping, or I could maybe just say in Wales,

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‫a caravan and camping with a least popular between.

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‫And in Northern Ireland, these two were the least popular between kind of just speeding up a little

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‫bit because I need to be careful on time.

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‫In Wales, the two least popular types of lodging are use.

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‫Lodging again were caravans and camping between, let's say, eight percent to around 13 percent in

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‫Northern Ireland.

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‫In Northern Ireland, both self-catering and here I can see they're the same the same amount, so I'll

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‫mention this both self-catering and camping were, let's say, a third, the joint third popular choices

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‫at Ekwall, 12 percent.

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‫Let's say let's just rewrite this a little bit in Northern Ireland, both self-catering and camping

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‫with a joint third popular choices at equal to 12 percent each.

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‫OK, so just sped up a little bit for the last two sentences, let's read back to ensure that I have

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‫not made any mistakes dramatically in Wales, the two least popular types of lodging were caravans and

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‫camping between eight percent to 13 percent in Northern Ireland, both self-catering and camping with

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‫a joint a third least popular choices.

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‫Let's add this in at least popular choices at equal to 12 percent each.

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‫Great.

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‫So I've really given some good detail at the end there.

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‫Let's take a look at the word count.

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‫OK, so my word count is, as I have checked, stands at a hundred and seventy eight words, and I would

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‫say that really that's about the ideal size of a task.

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‫One report, if we're sort of a hundred and fifty two, it's almost too short.

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‫Maybe not enough detail.

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‫Over 220 starting to get long, 250, maybe that's far too long.

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‫And of course within the 20 minutes we have to have finished all of this from receiving the question

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‫to writing a plan to creating our full report.

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‫It gets easier with more practice.

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‫So again, here we have a really strong answer for a task.

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‫One report for a bar chart.

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‫Of course, you could write your own so you could maybe screenshot this with the question and try and

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‫write your own and then compare to me.

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‫That would be a great activity for you to undertake.

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‫OK, so let's move on to our next lesson.